Rating: 
Summary: Not Good
Review: After reading this book it seems to me the author had his friends write the preceding reviews. Notice how most seem to be from the same state of Missouri? I don't want to put Daniel down, most youth at 14 don't sit down and write books. Unfortunately, there's a reason for that. His command of the english language is very far from complete both grammatically and in terms of spelling. I am thinking there was no copy editor, small publisher.
The plot itself is bland and progresses badly. Even when time is spent trying to give characters depth they end up shallow and boring. The dialogue is poor. The universe has a lot of stolen elements from Dungeons and Dragons (except as futuristic sci-fi) with no really original content or application. I kept thinking this had the potential to be an above average book if the author had written it 8 years later than he did.
If you want to support a writer that might really be worth reading after he finishes college, buy this book. If you're not feeling charitable...don't.
Rating:
Summary: Not Good
Review: After reading this book it seems to me the author had his friends write the preceding reviews. I don't want to put Daniel down, most youth at 14 don't sit down and write books. Unfortunately, there's a reason for that. His command of the english language is very far from complete both grammatically and in terms of spelling. I am thinking there was no copy editor, small publisher. The plot itself is bland and progresses badly. Even when time is spent trying to give characters depth they end up shallow and boring. The dialogue is poor. The universe has a lot of stolen elements from Dungeons and Dragons (except as futuristic sci-fi) with no really original content or application. I kept thinking this had the potential to be an above average book if the author had written it 8 years later than he did. If you want to support a writer that might really be worth reading after he finishes college, buy this book. If you're not feeling charitable...don't.
Rating: 
Summary: Highly reccomended book
Review: I am in the process of reading The Falacy of the Thief and I really enjoy it. It is a great start for this talented young author and I highly reccomend it to anyone who enjoys science fiction or who wants to discover the works of a talented new author.
Rating:
Summary: Highly reccomended book
Review: I am in the process of reading this book. It's a great science fiction book even tho I am not a fan of science fiction. This book is appropriate for anyone over the age of thirteen. I personally know the author and look forward to reading more of his work in the future. If you like science fiction and enjoy reading books written by teens, this book is a MUST READ.
Rating:
Summary: A "The Fallacy of the Thief" reader
Review: I am in the process of reading this book. It's a great science fiction book even tho I am not a fan of science fiction. This book is appropriate for anyone over the age of thirteen. I personally know the author and look forward to reading more of his work in the future. If you like science fiction and enjoy reading books written by teens, this book is a MUST READ.
Rating:
Summary: Three Thumbes up
Review: I bought the book from daniel shortly after he published it. In that time i have read it six times. It is a great book that combines science-fiction with a political twist a great book which should be read by any science-fiction fan.
Rating:
Summary: Three Thumbes up
Review: I bought the book from daniel shortly after he published it. In that time i have read it six times. It is a great book that combines science-fiction with a political twist a great book which should be read by any science-fiction fan.
Rating:
Summary: EXCELLENT!
Review: This book is the best I have read. Highly recommended! Can't wait for more from this author!
Rating:
Summary: A GATEWAY FOR MANY; AN INSPIRATION FOR EVERYONE!
Review: This book was extra-ordinary in every way comprehendable. It has opened up a door for me. Because of it, I now plan on reading more novels in this category. This Sci-Fi novel takes you on a riveting journey of a socially rejected hybrid and his team of wizards, the Elites, who are out to fufill what they believe in. Rights for the good magic users. But, many obsticles stand in their way. This brings us to the other main group of characters. Division 33, the best team of Enforcers in the galaxy, enforcing the law among all citizens. With many twists between these two sets of characters, the author, astonishingly enough, is able to add a political plot into effect. Two parties create the pro-magic users and the against-magic users. Keeping this in mind the novel is full of Demons and Vampires which keep you interested in the somewhat short boring parts of the Political arena. To top this all off, it's hard to believe that all this turmoil is part of a plan of a master-minded individual. Can the Elites reach their goal as they explore caves, space stations, and high-security prisons. Read the book and find out. This book, part Sci-Fi, part Fantasy, and part Political has the biggest, and most surprising ending I have ever read. I suggest you read this book as soon as you can, because it is certain there are more books to come from this author, and each one will take us on a breath taking journey of deceit, frendship, death, and journey for righteousness.
Rating:
Summary: A GATEWAY FOR MANY; AN INSPIRATION FOR EVERYONE!
Review: This book was extra-ordinary in every way comprehendable. It has opened up a door for me. Because of it, I now plan on reading more novels in this category. This Sci-Fi novel takes you on a riveting journey of a socially rejected hybrid and his team of wizards, the Elites, who are out to fufill what they believe in. Rights for the good magic users. But, many obsticles stand in their way. This brings us to the other main group of characters. Division 33, the best team of Enforcers in the galaxy, enforcing the law among all citizens. With many twists between these two sets of characters, the author, astonishingly enough, is able to add a political plot into effect. Two parties create the pro-magic users and the against-magic users. Keeping this in mind the novel is full of Demons and Vampires which keep you interested in the somewhat short boring parts of the Political arena. To top this all off, it's hard to believe that all this turmoil is part of a plan of a master-minded individual. Can the Elites reach their goal as they explore caves, space stations, and high-security prisons. Read the book and find out. This book, part Sci-Fi, part Fantasy, and part Political has the biggest, and most surprising ending I have ever read. I suggest you read this book as soon as you can, because it is certain there are more books to come from this author, and each one will take us on a breath taking journey of deceit, frendship, death, and journey for righteousness.
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