Relative Dementias (Doctor Who)

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Summary: Good Ideas, Poor Execution
Review: I approach all Dr. Who novels as entertaining but not meaningful reads - I read a great deal of literature and consider these a guilty pleasure. For the most part they're well written and provide some genuine fun for Who fans. Relative Dementias is no exception, finding the 7th Doctor and Ace in yet another precarious position. Unfortunately the author bravely tries to pull off some time-travel surprises but only succeeds in making the last third of the book choppy and confusing. It was a good idea but the execution wasn't great. And if I see the Doctor described as "diminutive" again, I'm going to scream. This must be some directive from the BBC as Relative Dementias is not the only book to describe the character this way.

All-in-all, decent story with ideas that exceeded the author's abilities or effort.

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Summary: The Missing New Adventure
Review: Now that the Past Doctor Adventures no longer feature that little back cover blurb telling you in between which televised "Doctor Who" stories the book took place, it's fun to play that game at home. "Relative Dementias", a rookie effort by Mark Michalowski, is almost definitely set during the TV show's 26th and final season -- witness a reference to that season's premiere, "Battlefield", and the Doctor wearing the dark-brown coat he sported only in that season. Ace fails to recognize alien technology she'll later meet in a novel set during the putative "Season 27" (the linked PDAs written by Mike Tucker and Robert Perry). So, most likely, "Relative Dementias" takes place before the New Adventures happened.

However, this book IS a New Adventure. In tone and texture and content, it's as close as we've seen to an NA since that series lost its "Doctor Who" license early in 1997.

And yes, by being an NA, "Relative Dementias" is far better than many of the PDAs (or EDAs) that came before it.

Although the majority of the book is set in Scotland in 1982 (a year characterized solely by references to the Falkland Islands... with one "Star Wars" in-joke that could also have worked in 2002), there's an intro sequence and a coda set in the London of 2012. Overlaying the book is a moderately nifty time paradox involving this other time zone.

"Relative Dementias" also touches on deeply personal issues, apart from the science fiction. The novel's early thrust is Alzheimer's Disease -- much of the book takes place in a home for Alzheimer's patients. Another character is revealed, late in the book, to have a rare genetic disorder. The book's "main" character, a UNIT scientist named Joyce Brunner (like the NAs, this book partly shifts focus off the Doctor in favor of an original character), is introduced as an old friend having family issues of her own -- involving not just her aging mother, but also her rebellious son -- a UNIT cadet.

So, here's a book that begins nicely, and ends nicely. In between, there's the author's-first-novel sin of.. well, just too much running around. A chase around the Alzheimer's home, a dash through the woods, a detour to a deserted island (seemingly inexplicable until you get to the end), and, hey!, since this is "Doctor Who", a fight in a seemingly abandoned church.

The other sin is the conflict. Joyce's son is mad at the Doctor; Ace gets mad at the Doctor. You get the picture. I'm not sure why, though. The Doctor's final gambit is rather clever (and laugh-out-loud funny). Ace's negative reaction, however, sours the book, and I'm not quite sure I sympathize with her. Then again, gratuitous Ace angst was par for the course in the NAs, so you'd expect to find the problem here too. Even though there's a happy ending, and a party over the last 15 pages (a technique well pioneered in the NAs by Paul Cornell), there's a foreboding cliffhanger, of sorts, involving a frightening new memory plaguing the Doctor.

On the whole, if you want to remember what compelling "Doctor Who" fiction used to look like, "Relative Dementias" (while certainly not on the level of "Festival of Death") is a good place to start. It's also the best 7th Doctor PDA I've read to this point.

Rating:
Summary: The Missing New Adventure
Review: Now that the Past Doctor Adventures no longer feature that little back cover blurb telling you in between which televised "Doctor Who" stories the book took place, it's fun to play that game at home. "Relative Dementias", a rookie effort by Mark Michalowski, is almost definitely set during the TV show's 26th and final season -- witness a reference to that season's premiere, "Battlefield", and the Doctor wearing the dark-brown coat he sported only in that season. Ace fails to recognize alien technology she'll later meet in a novel set during the putative "Season 27" (the linked PDAs written by Mike Tucker and Robert Perry). So, most likely, "Relative Dementias" takes place before the New Adventures happened.

However, this book IS a New Adventure. In tone and texture and content, it's as close as we've seen to an NA since that series lost its "Doctor Who" license early in 1997.

And yes, by being an NA, "Relative Dementias" is far better than many of the PDAs (or EDAs) that came before it.

Although the majority of the book is set in Scotland in 1982 (a year characterized solely by references to the Falkland Islands... with one "Star Wars" in-joke that could also have worked in 2002), there's an intro sequence and a coda set in the London of 2012. Overlaying the book is a moderately nifty time paradox involving this other time zone.

"Relative Dementias" also touches on deeply personal issues, apart from the science fiction. The novel's early thrust is Alzheimer's Disease -- much of the book takes place in a home for Alzheimer's patients. Another character is revealed, late in the book, to have a rare genetic disorder. The book's "main" character, a UNIT scientist named Joyce Brunner (like the NAs, this book partly shifts focus off the Doctor in favor of an original character), is introduced as an old friend having family issues of her own -- involving not just her aging mother, but also her rebellious son -- a UNIT cadet.

So, here's a book that begins nicely, and ends nicely. In between, there's the author's-first-novel sin of.. well, just too much running around. A chase around the Alzheimer's home, a dash through the woods, a detour to a deserted island (seemingly inexplicable until you get to the end), and, hey!, since this is "Doctor Who", a fight in a seemingly abandoned church.

The other sin is the conflict. Joyce's son is mad at the Doctor; Ace gets mad at the Doctor. You get the picture. I'm not sure why, though. The Doctor's final gambit is rather clever (and laugh-out-loud funny). Ace's negative reaction, however, sours the book, and I'm not quite sure I sympathize with her. Then again, gratuitous Ace angst was par for the course in the NAs, so you'd expect to find the problem here too. Even though there's a happy ending, and a party over the last 15 pages (a technique well pioneered in the NAs by Paul Cornell), there's a foreboding cliffhanger, of sorts, involving a frightening new memory plaguing the Doctor.

On the whole, if you want to remember what compelling "Doctor Who" fiction used to look like, "Relative Dementias" (while certainly not on the level of "Festival of Death") is a good place to start. It's also the best 7th Doctor PDA I've read to this point.

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Summary: Scottish Who
Review: Relative Dementias is a Past Doctor novel starring the 7th Doctor and Ace

Mark Michalowski has written a very good first book that's marred only by trying to pack too much into the story and some dodgy character motivations. All in all, though, it's a very interesting story.

The Seventh Doctor and Ace stop in 2012 to pick up the Doctor's mail. There are a couple of interesting pieces, though, and it sends them back in time to Scotland in 1982 to help an old friend. Unfortunately, that old friend is missing, and the search leads to Greystairs, an Alzheimer's clinic. There, some of the patients seem to be responding very well to treatments to restore their memories. However, some memories can be dangerous, not only to the patients, but to others.

In the course of the story, many questions are asked. Why is the Doctor being so secretive about his actions before they arrive in Scotland? What are the strange disappearances that have taken place locally? Who is stalking them as they explore the area? Just what is Michael's secret, and why won't he talk to Ace? What does he have against the Doctor?

The book comes complete with weird time-travel activities, a manipulative Seventh Doctor (which is his usual characterization, for those who don't follow the series) and Ace, who is a tough young woman, slightly out of her element, but determined to do the best she can in the situation. I've always found this team to be an interesting one, even more so in the books than in the TV series. Ace doesn't quite fit the typical "companion" role in the Doctor Who series: she's often more of a partner than most of them are. She doesn't scream, for instance. She's a "take-action" kind of girl. She's well-served in this book, taking on a large portion of the action. It's a good thing that Michalowski writes her so well.

The other characters aren't served quite as well, though. The minor characters are fairly forgettable, especially the patients at the clinic. I found it hard to tell them apart sometimes, and when the ultimate revelation about what's going on happens, I still couldn't tell the difference. Claire, the barmaid, is a little better, but she's also fairly one-note. There's an attraction between her and Michael, but it's only mentioned in passing and nothing is ever made of it.

In fact, that sort of thing is one of the problems with the book. Too much is mentioned and then never developed. There's a murder at Greystairs that the Doctor discovers, but it's never mentioned again. Sure, the murderer gets his/her comeuppance, but only because of what happens in the plot. It has nothing to do with bringing the murderer to justice. It just sort of hangs there and is never mentioned again.

Then there's a conflict between Ace and the Doctor that grows out of nowhere. The reason for it, though stated at the time the problem happens, has no preamble whatsoever and I was actually surprised that all of a sudden, these two characters are fighting. Why? Supposedly, the Doctor has broken a promise that we've never seen him make, so it comes completely out of left field.

The final thing I want to address about character is Michael, and his motivation. He goes through most of the book hiding his real reason for being in the area, and hiding why he's so antagonistic toward the Doctor. When he ultimately reveals it, I was left with a skeptical feeling. I just didn't believe it. I won't reveal what the problem is here, but I will say that I can see no way that events would happen as he says they did. It's just not logical. People don't act the way he describes them. To me, it brought his whole characterization to a crashing halt.

The story itself is fascinating, though. There are a lot of twists and turns, and the ending is a mad dash to the finish line with a wonderfully Doctorish solution to the problem. The only problem is that it's a little too packed. While the book plods a little bit in the middle, the end is so full that the reader doesn't have time to take a breath. There's revelation after revelation hitting the reader in the face. The author has said that he cut a huge amount from his manuscript to fit the required word count, and it shows. The time travel antics were interesting (I won't say who's involved in them, because the revelation of that is actually part of the fun of the book) and I didn't find them confusing at all.

This past Doctor adventure is definitely worth picking up, especially if you're a fan of the Seventh Doctor/Ace partnership. With the exception of the conflict at the end, they are characterized beautifully. It's also a good book to introduce a non-Who fan to. It's well-written, and most of all it's fun.

Rating:
Summary: Fun, but a little clumsy
Review: The BBC Doctor Who book series can be a bit of a lucky dip. While the series as a whole often achieves a high literary standard, it also seems to function as a proving ground for rookie sci-fi writers, to whom there is great value in a captive fanboy audience.

That isn't to say that the series cheapens itself by this practice, nor that Mark Michalowski is not talented as a writer. Michalowski is obviously genuine in his involvement with Doctor Who, and has the skill to pull it off. There are some very well handled ideas in the book. I especially liked the idea of the UNIT soldiers' resentment towards the Doctor - that was particularly well executed as part of the seventh Doctor's characterisation.

Where the book ultimately fails is in assuring the reader that he or she is in sufficiently capable hands to gain the trust that is required in the last third or so of the book. As part of the plot, the narrative suddenly becomes somewhat paradoxical. My experience was of turning back pages, wondering if I had missed a vital point, or if the chapters were numbered out of order. I hadn't and they weren't, but I simply wasn't happy to take that on faith and read on, so I had an uncomfortable few chapters until I saw what the author was getting at.

Quibbles aside, "Relative Dementias" is a good read, with a well characterised Doctor, and it was good to see Ace behaving in a more believable fashion. I was never at all convinced by the TV scripts she was given, with embarrassing "Street talk" and a "tough-girl" cliche that succumbed much too often to the usual Who Girl screaming and running. Three stars, maybe three and a half.

Rating:
Summary: Fun, but a little clumsy
Review: The BBC Doctor Who book series can be a bit of a lucky dip. While the series as a whole often achieves a high literary standard, it also seems to function as a proving ground for rookie sci-fi writers, to whom there is great value in a captive fanboy audience.

That isn't to say that the series cheapens itself by this practice, nor that Mark Michalowski is not talented as a writer. Michalowski is obviously genuine in his involvement with Doctor Who, and has the skill to pull it off. There are some very well handled ideas in the book. I especially liked the idea of the UNIT soldiers' resentment towards the Doctor - that was particularly well executed as part of the seventh Doctor's characterisation.

Where the book ultimately fails is in assuring the reader that he or she is in sufficiently capable hands to gain the trust that is required in the last third or so of the book. As part of the plot, the narrative suddenly becomes somewhat paradoxical. My experience was of turning back pages, wondering if I had missed a vital point, or if the chapters were numbered out of order. I hadn't and they weren't, but I simply wasn't happy to take that on faith and read on, so I had an uncomfortable few chapters until I saw what the author was getting at.

Quibbles aside, "Relative Dementias" is a good read, with a well characterised Doctor, and it was good to see Ace behaving in a more believable fashion. I was never at all convinced by the TV scripts she was given, with embarrassing "Street talk" and a "tough-girl" cliche that succumbed much too often to the usual Who Girl screaming and running. Three stars, maybe three and a half.

Rating:
Summary: Atmospheric but a little confusing
Review: This is the first piece of writing I have seen from this author so I opened the first page with no preconceptions. It started promising, the idea of the Doctor popping in to check his mail, being rather intriguing.
Without wanting to reveal too much of the plot, the book is during the first three quarters, quite easy to read and relatively interesting. Then, due to a brave attempt to explore the concept of time-travel it becomes very confusing. It would have been hard to have done it in any other way, but as far as I was concerned, I felt that I had missed whole pages of the narrative and wasn't really able to follow the plot. I am referring mainly to the adventures of Ace on a Scotish island and in the mental hospital on the Scottish mainland, seemingly at the same time.
The characterisation of both Ace and the 7th Doctor are certainly believable and fit in with the mood of the 26th season. As for the enemies of the piece, well, for me they were rather forgettable, even after only finishing the book one or two weeks ago.
A promising start with some generally good ideas but in the end I could only think how much better it could have been. Hopefully Mark Mickalowski's 2nd novel will fulfil his potential in a more satisfying way.