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Summary: Breathtaking & Educational
Review: I can't wait to read her next novel
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Summary: Shockingly sloppy and uninteresting
Review: If you have to buy this book, buy it used. It is not worth the paper it was printed on. Nor is her other book, Moon Goddess. Lion of Judah is saturated with numerous spelling, grammatical, and typographical mistakes. it also contains inconsistencies. It's plain that a proofreader was not used, and that the author -- presuming she proofread it herself -- couldn't catch her own mistakes. It is a wonder that it was even published. The idea is good, but the story is not written well at all. And, it contains some very corny content. For example, on page 118 of the paperback, she writes about a suspicious character: "He looked first to the left, then to the right, then quietly walked out of the library." And, in that same paragraph she provides one of the book's many annoying redundancies: "A third receiver was put back on its cradle at the end of the call. Ali hung up the phone shortly after Johannas hung up." Dennie even quotes the telephone, as if it can speak "Ring Ring". She does the same with the answering machine when she says "Beep". I could cite many, many more examples, and ones that are quite obvious too.
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Summary: Absolutely an insightful and refreshing read!
Review: Let me just say I read this book in one night. The story captivated me straight away. This story is simple penned with the spirit of God working in Janice. The writing is awesome and the story-telling superb. Kudos to Janice for writing a-soon-to-be bestseller! You have a fan forever. Keep up the gifted writing and never let go of YOUR dream!
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