Bright Eyes

Rating:
Summary: Okay...
Review: There was nothing wrong with the characters, or the story for that matter, but I found that too much time was dedicated to outside events, rather than what was between Zeke and Natalie.

Rating:
Summary: Good Writer, but ...
Review: too much of 'everyday' life was included. Even though it wasn't boring, I like more dialogue between the two main characters rather than reading about what one is cooking or what one's relative has to say. A little of that would have been fine, but too much time was given over to other things.