Toyland

Rating:
Summary: Toyland good but lacking
Review: This was an excellent story, but there was too much to take out and not enough put in. The story itself, the idea, was great, but it wasn't enough and the end was disappointing. I had to read the entire book in one sitting just to find out what was to happen. I would love to contact the author, but have been unable to find anything. The book would be superb with a stern re-write.