For More Than the Toaster Oven

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Summary: I read the second edited version
Review: A big "toast" to the author. I found the characters real, funny, interesting and believable. The writing was very descriptive and visual. Somewhat of a surpise ending but leaving you wanting more and anxious for the sequel.

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Summary: bought the second edition which was edited
Review: Apparently the first reader bought the original version which di have several typos. I noticed the book was under construction so I bought the second version and thought it was great. I didn't find it to be repetitive at all, and thought the ending was a refreshing surprise.

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Summary: get an editor...
Review: Honestly, I ordered this book because of the title. I should have learned my lesson long ago. The story is predictable, and at times repetitive. What irked me most however, were the numerous typos throughout the book. Spelling errors and a confused third person limited narration, in which the author alternates between the two main characters, and yet at times it seems even she is confused since the wrong name is accidently substituted. Spend your fifteen bucks elsewhere.

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Summary: I read the second edited version
Review: This is a great book, and a surprise for a new author. The website said there were about 100 sold with typos in the beginning and C.A. caught them and stopped the presses. The first review was probably one of the 100 to buy that version. I loved the book and can't wait for part two. Go ANGEL!