Hawaiian Love

Rating:
Summary: Frustrating Read
Review: I'm a self avowed bibliophile and willing to overlook some really bad plot lines, improbable dialogue, repetition, and even scattered chronology in the interest of satisfying the urge to read.

I do not like bad editing. This book has characters that change names (and not as a plot device), spelling and punctuation issues, and a nauseating "I LOVE you... no I love YOU" on every third page. The characters have no emotional evolution, no growth, and no genuine likeability. They are all pretty, capable women, without obvious character flaws. They exist merely to wrap everything up in a nice, happy ending. For the first time in as long as I can remember, I'm tempted to go through the book with a highlighter and reference every issue, write a full report on the problems, return the book and report to the editor asking for a job and my money back.

In case I was unclear, I was REALLY disappointed in this book.